Task 3

Dear Chloella, Ollie and Max,
Thanks so much for sending the video through to us. I've watched the film once and really enjoyed it - the only problem I had was that our computers at work don't offer much volume so I'm looking forward to watching again at home this evening and hearing the interviews properly.
I have forwarded the link on to Hannah and Charlotte so that they can watch to. I promise to forward any comments on to you but I loved the way the volunteers' enthusiasm for Christmas at Stourhead came across - they were obviously put at ease during the interviews - and I thought the footage you recorded was really thoughtful - I particularly enjoyed some of the close ups.
Thank you again for all your hard work on this project.
Best wishes
Emily

 

 

 

Hi Chloe-Ella, Ollie and Max,
As promised I've forwarded the link to your film to Charlotte, our Marketing and Communications Officer. She's made a couple of suggestions and I'm pasting her email below.
If you're able to act upon any of her suggestions for your final version of the film that would be great.
Many thanks
Emily

It looks great - will be fab to use on social media next year to help promote the Chirstmas house!
Three small suggestions I have are:
 - It may be a little easier to hear the wonderful volunteers if music volume was faded down slightly.
 - I am not sure about the logo of a tree above Stourhead on the final shot.
 - Also on the final shot to be 'on brand' with the Trust the social media handles should be in lower case '@ntstourhead' for Instagram and although we have registered the @ntstourhead name for twitter it isn't an active account so may be better to have the facebook logo and username.


Looks fab though!!

Best,
Charlotte